Dan Savage is pretty awesome, except for his hate-on for bisexuals, and his general tone of mild scorn when responding to transsexuals. Being a bi transsexual, the above is really rather irritating.

...But I've been reading him since I was 16, and at this point it would be hard to tell how much of my attitudes toward sex and sexuality are my own, and how many I adopted in my teens from him. He was formative! So I still read him.


Anyway, I quite like the fic. Dialogue-only fics can be hard to follow, but I didn't get too lost in this. (Just after the "..."s it took me a moment to orient myself again.) And you didn't make the mistake of never having the characters reference each other by name, since that always makes dialogue-only pretty much IMPOSSIBLE to follow.

The "doing/did/do" line really IS the best one in there, and I also really liked How many times do I have to turn you down before your ego shatters? Go to sleep and shut up. I could completely hear House saying that.